Driving for nearly three hours
in my dodge,
I was suddenly reminded of my love,
on seeing OORVASI lodge.
I drove into the car park,went into
the dimly lit restaurant,
and choose a cozy comfortable table
at one end of the room
I asked for her and "instantly"
she came to me,
all dressed in orange and white
A queenly sight!
with an aroma that roused my instincts.....
I lost my composure, and
immediately lifted her to me
with both my hands ,
touched my lips with hers
gingerly which few do
till she was completely exhausted.
A touch of satisfaction lit my face
and i became fresh as morning dew.
She is mine and mine will ever be,
Yes, she is she is sweet orange and white
And everybody calls her "TEA"
10 comments:
Wow...dat ws beautiful! I didn't expect to see tea in the end at all! :-)
I love the way he left her "exhausted" he he
LOL delightful!! intelligent choice of words, wudnt guess the ending coming at all :D
wow,...you seem to be so in love with poetry...heheh..it sounds wonerful aniwae..
That was truly amazing...I actually thought u were talking bout someone...Such a short poem with a climax!! Not everyone can do that...!!
looovely...makes me wanna runa nd make myself a cup... it has the homecoming feel and the luxury of a piece of free time all to oneself... beautiful...
oh Boy! I dint see that coming at all... :) watta ClimaX... he he...
Predictable :)
An unexpected climax..honestly had to re-read thelines to totally comprehend..I have fallen in love with the "orange pekoe" of my life.
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